I wonder about the window
that’s collecting dust as the leaves
are changing colors
close my eyes and hold a seashell
to my ear
listening the ocean
call me back to the beach house
where I can watch the moments
float round and round
in a summer time capsule
In the room above the house
oars rested in fishnets draped
across the ceiling
holding starfish constellations
It was a watch tower
between the sea and moon
Where the sandy breeze tickled my face
Sometimes I can still taste the sea salt
My dark eyes often transport me
I explore the bookshelves of thick texts
with old brown covers that dim the room
You pour me some wine
and I sit close while you read
your favorite poem
about a bird
by Edgar Allen Poe
chasing each word with your finger
as you read them syllable by syllable
On cold nights like tonight
I lie under a deep sea of blue comforters
envisioning the starfish constellations
And I whisper poe's lines:
“the raven sitting lonely…
spoke only that one word, as if his soul
in that one word he did out pour”
14 comments:
so nicely written.. and the inspiration of quoting the poe as your close really made it... excellent....
This took me right back to my childhood when we would rent a cottage at a lake and there was a bookshelf filled with old books. thanks for the walk down memory lane! Well done!
I could smell the sea. And thinking of all those books..............
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creatures of eerie night
Yeah, I like it! Chasing each word etc...
Beautiful and vivid, I could see everything so well. I loved the ending.
A perfect moment of inner peace.
It is so good when there is some time for the soul!
Gemma
The phrase 'your favorite poem about a bird by Edgar Allen Poe' is a stunner. Love your poem - it's vibrant and vivid.
very evocative, very good use of rhyme and line breaks.
I miss summer, too.
Excellently written, and Poe is without doubt my favourite writer ever.
I love the interior feel of this
poem, the listening in, as she
listens in. Very intimate, like
a secret is being shared with me.
A great poeish moment!
Writing style meme
Very vivid - great attention to detail, like being there.
This is gorgeous. I agree with Cynthia.
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