Friday, October 17, 2008

Eyes for the stars

His eye was the kind that bent and twisted
with a liquid appearance,
deep and shimmery
like bay water at night
when the light bounces
off its calm surface

On contact
any celestial body
could shed its rough surface
and orbit its infinite center
as a planet does around stars.


shazkaboom said...

Your poetry is amazing!


matthew said...

your poems are lovely. very nice work!

writerwoman said...

I'm going to include this poem in January's PWB collection on Jan. 30th.

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paisley said...

very well done.. i would love to look into such amazing eyes.....

Zouxzoux said...

"deep and shimmery
like bay water at night"

Exquisitely written.

Beautiful poem.